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Thinks true love acted, fimple modefty.
Come, night!-Come, Romeo! come, thou day in
night,

For thou wilt lie upon the wings of night
Whiter than new fnow on a raven's back.-
Come, gentle night; come, loving, black-brow'd
night,

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Give me my Romeo: and, when he fhall die,
Take him and cut him out in little ftars',
And he will make the face of heaven' fo fine,
That all the world fhall be in love with night,
And pay no worship to the garith fun.-
O, I have bought the manfion of a love,
But not poflefs'd it; and, though I am fold,
Not yet enjoy'd: So tedious is this day,
As is the night before fome feftival

To an impatient child, that hath new robes,
And may not wear them. O, here comes my nurse,
Enter

printed) is fluttering with the wings as ftriving to fly away. So, in Ben Jonfon's Sad Shepherd:

"A hawk yet half fo haggard and unmanı’d.” Agair, in an old ballad intitled Prettie Comparisons wittily grounded, &c :

"Or like a lack that's never man'd,

"Or like a hide before 'tis tan'd."

Again, in the Booke of Faulyng, &c. bl. 1. no date: "It is called bating, for fhe bateth with herfelie molt often caufeleffe.” STEEVENS.

7 Take him and cut him into little ftars, &c] The fame childish thought occurs in The Wisdom of Doctor Dodypole, which was acted before the year 15 6:

"The glorious parts of faire Lucilia,

"Take them and joine them in the heavenly fpheres ; And fixe them there as an eternal light,

For lovers to adore and wonder at." STEEVENS. the garish fun.] Milton had this fpeech in his thoughts when he wrote Il Penjerofo:

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Civil night,

"Thou fober fuited matron."-Shakspeare.

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Till civil-fuited morn appear."-Milton.

Pay no worship to the garish fun."-Shakspeare.
Hide me from day's garish eye."-Milton.

JOHNSON.

Enter Nurfe, with cords.

And the brings news; and every tongue, that fpeaks But Romeo's name, fpeaks heavenly eloquence.Now, nurfe, what news? What haft thou there? the cords,

That Romeo bid thee fetch?

Nurje. Ay, ay, the cords.

ful. Ay me! what news? why dost thou wring thy hands?

Nurfe. Ah well-a-day! he's dead, he's dead, he's dead!

We are undone, lady, we are undone !

Alack the day!-he's gone, he's kill'd, he's dead! Jul. Can heaven be fo envious?

Nurfe. Romeo can,

Though heaven cannot :O Romeo! Romeo!Who ever would have thought it? - Romeo!

Jul. What devil art thou, that doft torment me thus?

This torture fhould be roar'd in difmal hell. Hath Romeo flain himself? fay thou but I, 7 And that bare vowel I fhall poifon more

Garish is gaudy, fhowy. So, in Richard III:
"A dream of what thou waft, a garish Hag.

Again, in Marlowe's Edward I!, 1622:

ftance : "

"march'd like players

"With garish robes."

Than

It fometimes fignifies wild, flighty. So, in the following inftarting up and gairishly staring about, efpecially on the face of Elioflo." Hinde's Eliofo Libidinofa, 1606.

7 And that bare vowel ay shall poifon more

STEEVENS.

Than the death-darting eye of cockatrice.] I queftion much whether the grammarians will take this new vowel on truft from Mr. Pope, without fufpecting it rather for a diphthong. In short, we muft reftore the fpelling of the old books, or we lofe the poet's conceit. At this time of day, the affirmative adverb ay was generally written I and by this means it both becomes a vowel, and anfwers in found to eye, upon which the conceit turns in the fecond line. THEOBALD.

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Than the death darting eye of cockatrice :
I am not I, if there be fuch an I;

Or thofe eyes fhut, that make the answer, I.
If he be flain fay-I; or if not, no:

Brief founds determine of my wcal, or woe.

Nurfe. I faw the wound, Ifaw it with mine eyes,God fave the mark !-here on his manly breaft: A piteous corfe, a bloody piteous corse; Pale, pale as afhes, all bedaub'd in blood, All in gore blood;-I fownded at the fight. Jul. O break, my heart!-poor bankrupt, break

at once!

To prifon, cyes! ne'er look on liberty!
Vile earth, to earth refign; end motion here
And thou, and Romeo, prefs one heavy bier!
Nurfe. O Tybalt, Tybalt, the best friend I had!
O courteous Tybalt! honeft gentleman!
That ever I fhould live to fee thee dead!

ful. What ftorm is this that blows fo contrary?
Is Romco flaughter'd? and is Tybalt dead?
My dear-lov'd coufin, and my dearer lord?-
Then, dreadful trumpet, found the general doom!
For who is living, if those two are gone?

Nurfe. Tybalt is gone, and Romeo banished; Romeo, that kill'd him, he is banished.

death darting eye of cockatrice.] The ftrange lines that follow here in the common books, are not in the old edi. tion. POPE.

The ftrange lines are thefe :

I am not I, if there be fuch an I,

Or thefe eyes fhot, that makes thee answer I;
If he be flain, fay I; or if not, no :

Brief founds determine of my weal or woe.

Thefe lines hardly deferve emendation; yet it may be proper to obferve, that their meannefs has not placed them below the malice of fortune, the first two of them being evidently tranfpofed; we should read:

-That one vowel 7 fhall poifon more,

Than the death-darting eye of cockatrice,
Or thofe cycs hot, that make the answer, I.
I am not I, &c. JOHNEON,

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Jul. O God!-did Romeo's hand fhed Tybalt's blood?

Nurfe. It did, it did; alas the day! it did. Jul. O ferpent heart, hid with a flow'ring face! Did ever dragon keep fo fair a cave?

Beautiful tyrant! fiend angelical !

• Dove-feather'd raven! wolvifh-ravening lamb!
Defpifed fubftance of divineft show!

Juft oppofite to what thou juftly feem'ft,
A damned faint, an honourable villain!-
O, nature! what hadft thou to do in hell,
When thou didst bower the fpirit of a fiend
In mortal paradife of fuch sweet flesh ?-
Was ever book, containing fuch vile matter,
So fairly bound? O, that deceit fhould dwell
In fuch a gorgeous palace!

Nurfe. There's no truft,

No faith, no honefty in men; all perjur'd,
All forfworn, all naught, all diffemblers.-

Ah, where's my man? give me fome aqua vita:-
Thefe griefs, thefe woes, thefe forrows make me old.
Shame come to Romeo!

ful. Blifter'd be thy tongue,

For fuch a wifh! he was not born to fhame:

Upon

I think the tranfpofition recommended may be fpared. The fecond line is corrupted. Read but instead of shot, and then the meaning will be fufficiently intelligible.

Shot, however, may be the fame as hut. So, in Chaucer's Miller's Tale, late edit. ver. 3358:

"And dreffed him up by a hot window." STEEVENS.

8 Dove-feather'd raven! &c.] In old editions,

Ravenous dove, feather'd raven, &c.] The four following lines not in the first edition, as well as fome others which I have omitted.

POPE.

Ravenous dore, feather'd raven,

Wolvifh-ravening lamb! This paffige Mr. Pope has thrown out of the text, because these two noble hemiftichs are inharmonious: but is there no fuch thing as a crutch for a labouring, halting verfe? I'll venture to restore to the poet a line that is in his own mode of thinking, and truely worthy of him. Ra

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Upon his brow fhame is afham'd to fit ;
For 'tis a throne where honour may be crown'd
Sole monarch of the univerfal earth.

O, what a beaft was I to chide at him!

Nurfe. Will you fpeak well of him that kill'd your coufin?

Jul. Shall I fpeak ill of him that is my husband ? 'Ah,poor my lord,what tongue fhall fmooth thyname, When I, thy three-hours wife, have mangled it ?But, wherefore, villain didft thou kill my coufin? That villain coufin would have kill'd my husband : Back, foolish tears, back to your native fpring;

'Your

venous was blunderingly coined out of raven and ravening; and if we only throw it out, we gain at once an harmonious verie, and a proper contraft of epithets and images:

Dove-feather'd raven! wolvifh-rav'ning lamb! THEOBALD. 9 Upon his brow flame is afbam'd to fit;] So, in Painter's Palace of Pleafure, tom. ii. p, 223: "Is it poffible that under fuch beautie and rare comelineffe, difloyaltie and treafon may have their fedge and lodging?" This fentiment is not in the poem.

STEEVENS. Ah, poor my lord, what tongue ball smooth thy name, When I, thy three-hours wife, have mangled it?] So, in the poem already quoted:

"Ah cruel murd'ring tongue, murderer of other's fame,
How durit thou once attempt to touch the honour of his
name?

"Whofe deadly foes do yield him due and earned praife,
For though his freedom be bereft, his honour not decays.
"Why blam'st thou Romeus for flaying of Tybalt?
"Since he is guiltless quite, and Tybalt bears the fault.
Whither fhall he, alas! poor banish'd man, now fly?
"What place of fuccour fhall he feek beneath the starry
fky?

"Since the purfueth him, and him defames of wrong,
That in diftrefs fhould be his fort, and only rampire
ftrong." MALONE.

• Back foolish tears, &c.] So, in the Tempest:

-I am a fool

To weep at what I am glad of.

I think, in this fpeech of Juliet, the words quoe and joy fhould change places; otherwife, her reafoning is inconclufive.

STEEVENS.

Julier'

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