EMULATION AS AN ELEMENT IN POETRY. A Literary Note. BY R. W. BOODLE, MONTREAL. Nor would it be uninstructive to attempt to trace and differentiate the effects of the different passions upon poetic and ordinary natures. The present small contribution to a great subject was suggested by observing the curious fate of Scott's beautiful description of the Trosachs in 'The Lady of the Lake.' Suggested itself by a passage in Milton (which was possibly due in part to a description in Boccaccio), it has been outdone by Wordsworth in one of his most magnificent passages. Wordsworth's own description in turn served as a model to Tennyson and to James Russell Lowell. I shall come to this part of my subject presently, but, before doing so I would suggest a few thoughts on the part that Emulation has played as a poetic motive power. Potent, to some extent, in all periods of poetic growth, Emulation is never so powerful as it is in the earliest periods. Keats has compared human life to a large mansion of many apartments; the first is the Infant or Thoughtless Chamber; the second the Chamber of Maiden Thought, in which, as the soul lingers, the light becomes gradually extiguished, and the soul begins to feel the 'Burden of the Mystery.' And as in human life, so in the growth of poetic stature there is an infant or thoughtless period, during which Emulation, or, as we should rather call it in this case, Imitation, is of paramount importance in the formation of style. The imitation is often indirect, unconscious, but still it is imitation. As a good illustration of which I will take the last verse of Tennyson's poem To' (published in 1830). [I must apologize to my readers for my frequency of quotation; but notes like these are useless unless profusely illustrated.] 6 'Weak Truth a-leaning on her crutch, Wan, wasted Truth in her utmost need, Thy kingly intellect shall feed, Until she be an athlete bold, And weary with a finger's touch Past Yabbok brook the livelong night, Here there is only one word that betrays the source of inspiration ; but who can doubt that from the fourth line onwards the youthful Tennyson is attempting to catch the inimitable movement of the last part of Keats' 'Sonnet' on Chapman's Homer, 'Oft of one wide expanse had I been told, That deep-brow'd Homer ruled as his de mesne: Yet did I never breathe its pure serene Till I heard Chapman speak out loud and bold: Then felt I like some watcher of the skies When a new planet swims into his ken; Or like stout Cortez when with eagle eyes He stared at the Pacific-and all his men Look at each other with a mild surmiseSilent upon a peak in Darien.' Of course, as thought is more and more' in the poet, direct imitation becomes less and less; still there are many expressions and passages, especially in the Greek and Roman masterpieces, that have been the source of frequent imitation, rising even to Emulation, by mature poets. Tennyson, I need hardly say, is a mosaic of classical recollections such as when he uses Virgil's 'Dixit: et avertens rosea cervice refulsit,' in the following lines of The Prin cess, 'She turned: the very nape of her white neck Was rosed with indignation.' Æschylus' famous ἀνήριθμον γέλασμα must have had a crowd of imitators, though I can only recall at the moment Keble's 'many-twinkling smile of ocean,' and 'the innumerable laughter of the sea,' of the 'Epic of Hades.' Horace's 'Deliberata morte ferocior Sævis Liburnis scilicet invidens Non humilis mulier triumpho,' written of Cleopatra, was most certainly in the mind of Shakespeare, if only as a recollection of school days, when he wrote 'My resolution's placed, and I have nothing Of woman in me.'-Antony and Cleopatra. So, too, Tennyson wrote to the same effect, 'I died a queen. The Roman soldier found Me lying dead, my crown about my brows, A name for ever! Lying robed and crown'd Worthy a Roman spouse.' And Cowper probably had Horace in his mind when describing the death of Boadicea 'She, with all a monarch's pride,' &c. I will not tire my readers with further illustrations of this point. It will be sufficient to say that the influence of the great classics upon the early style of poets can hardly be over-estimated. The manner of a young poet is necessarily to a great extent built up out of that of his predecessors, and until the time has come when he feels the consciousness of something specially his own that he has to give the world, his highest poetical efforts are little better than tours de force, written in the style of any poet under whose influence he has lately fallen. But as I have said before, the part of poetic emulation does not end here, There are certain commonplaces' or topics. that are the property of poets, whether Epic, Lyric or Elegiac, and these once called into being are constantly reappearing. In this case the thought is immaterial, and the excellence of the poet lies in the perfection of workmanship with which he handles his subject. I know not who it was who first compared the ocean swayed by the moon to the lover and his mistress, but the idea has been, perhaps, as fruit ful as any other in poetry. Here are a few instances of the use to which this comparison has been put. I will start with Shakespeare: : In Bailey's Festus' the same figure reappears in Helen's song 'Thine eye was glassed in mine As the moon is in the sea, The rose hath lost its red, Such an idea could not escape Tennyson, and we find it in his Dream of Fair Women :-' 'Once, like the moon, I made According to my humour ebb and flow.' Even after these passages one can appreciate the beauty of James Russell Lowell's lines, 'And, as the sea doth oft lie still, Making its waters meet, As if by an unconscious will, For the moon's silver feet, So lay my soul within mine eyes When thou, its guardian moon, didst rise. "And now, how e'er its waves above May toss and seem unceaseful, One strong, eternal law of Love, I will now turn to the group of passages, the similarity, between some of which has, I believe, never been pointed out, but which led me originally to put these few notes together on the subject of poetic Emulation. The passages are interesting not only for their intrinsic beauty, but for the curious exemplification they give of the transmission of ideas, as well as for the capital illustration that they afford of the different styles of their authors. The idea of comparing the labouring hand of Nature to the works of human architecture must have often struck poets, but it was never so fully brought out before, as by Sir Walter Scott in his description of the Trosachs. In the passage of Milton, that was in Scott's mind when he wrote his description, the idea is not present. Still it will be interesting to have all the passages before us. We need not begin with "The western waves of ebbing day Nor were these earth-born castles bare, *This is the date of publication, that of writing was during the summer of 1809, when Sir Walter was in the midst of the Trosachs. He has a very similar description in Rokeby II. 8. The primrose pale and violet flower, -(Canto I., 12, 13.) Unhappily for Sir Walter, his magnificent description attracted the attention of a genius of mightier mould, and, in 1814, it appeared in "The Excursion' (Book II.), at once etherialized and transformed. But we must give to Scott, at least, the merit of suggesting the following passage : 'A single step, that freed me from the skirts unto The vapours had receded, taking there Clouds, mists, streams, watery rock and emerald turf, Clouds of all tincture, rocks and sapphire sky, Stood fixed; and fixed resemblances were seen Such as by Hebrew Prophets were beheld Such a passage as this could not fail of imitators, and has found two at least. In 1827-8 the Poet Laureate was writing his 'Lover's Tale'-a poem interesting if only as a work in which the student of literature can trace the different styles that contributed to form that unique medium of elegance and thought, which is the most perfect part of Tennyson's poetic work-his style. The following pas sage comes from the first part of the 'Lover's Tale' : "The path was perilous, loosely strewn with crags: We mounted slowly; yet to both there came And over all the great wood rioting Framing the mighty landscape to the west, Few critics would be inclined to claim for this passage any high merit in itself. Whatever beauty, however, it possesses belongs to Wordsworth rather than to Tennyson. In the last passage which I shall quote, the writer has made the idea thoroughly his own. The origin of the passage is clear enough, but it is quite worthy of a place by the side of Scott and Wordsworth. It comes from the Vision of Sir Laun fal' (1848) by J. Russell Lowell, and very happily describes the work of a severe American winter :: 'Down swept the chill wind from the mountain peak, From the snow five thousand summers old; On open wold and hill-top bleak It had gathered all the cold, And whirled it like sleet on the wanderer's cheek ; It carried a shiver everywhere From the unleafed boughs and pastures bare; All night by the white stars' frosty gleams and here He caught the nodding bullrush-tops I cannot conclude these jottings without noting a further part that is played by the poetic motive power of Emulation. We have seen that, as Imitation, it determines the form that the poet's earliest efforts at expression And notwithstanding the fact that these short swallow-flights of song' bear unmistakable signs of the labour of the file we may believe him. For 'In Memoriam' was the inspired utterance of the spiritual hopes and fears of its time; to this fact is to be attributed alike its immense prestige in the past and its sensibly lessened hold upon the present age. But in the case of such poets as Virgil and Milton we have to look for some other motive power than the inspiration of a burdened heart. Such a motive power we find in Emulation, in the wish inspired by the masterpieces of other poets to produce something the world will not willingly let die. With this master-force, if it is to be effective, other things must cooperate. Poetical sensibility, a well stored mind, practice in verse, are all necessary to give form to the poet's words. But in such cases the motive power is to be found in Emulation. |